Louisa May Alcott

Louisa May Alcott
An American writer

Sunday, April 24, 2011

Growing Conflicted

Still working on Maass's chapter on Inner Conflict (Chapter 3), and in looking back at the work I did for Chapter 2 (Multidimensional Characters) I see now that identifying those extra character dimensions is a good chunk of the work toward creating (but not, darn it, solving) internal struggles for the characters.  For example, in the wip, the hero's primary trait is that he's a rescuer.  He sees himself as the person who swoops in and takes care of things for those who can't.  He's a doctor, as well, which plays right into that.  Rescuer types often become EMTs, doctors, etc.

The opposite of that would be to throw someone to the wolves, a very villainous trait and one I don't think that my hero has.  Still, I wrote a scene with him doing something like that just to see what would happen.  Very interesting.

But what would happen if someone came along who he could not save?  Someone with cancer, or (in this instance) a mental illness that was simply beyond the medicine of the times to treat?  How would that challenge him as a person?  As a doctor? 

So let's hear it.  Pick one of your characters and tell me his or her defining quality, as Maass puts it.  What's the one trait someone would use to describe your character, as in "he's honest" or "she's very direct".  Now, what's the opposite of that, and how would you show some growth from one toward the other, even if not all the way there?  Your honest hero might not have to become a pathological liar, but what would test his honesty?  And would there be a time when he could actually tell a lie to achieve some greater goal?

4 comments:

Renee said...

Carol, I was working on doing this very thing in my writing last night, and it just doesn't feel right. I plan on finishing the story and then going back to see what I need to do so that it does.

Carol Dunford said...

What didn't feel right, Renee? The conflict? I've gotten clear to the end of a mip and figured out I had it all wrong from the get-go. Arrrgghh!!

Keena Kincaid said...

Hi, Carol. My heroine from ANAM CARA Liza is very buttoned-up, assertive and a, borderline obsessive compulsive cleaner (pity that she lives in the Middle Ages where nothing is ever really clean). She's also someone who hates lies and liars and will cut you out of her life for lying to her.

Yet she's build her life on two lies. 1.) she hides her noble status, and 2.) she tells everyone her husband is dead (she left him) because it keeps her and her daughter safe.

Carol Dunford said...

Wow, Keena, that's awesome! So does she eventually recognize what she's doing at the end of the book?